Timeline for Why was Darth Vader so careless?
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| Feb 24, 2016 at 14:39 | comment | added | CigarDoug | "I lost a limb in three places." "Don't go to those three places anymore." | |
| Feb 5, 2016 at 20:14 | comment | added | Tobia Tesan | @femtoRgon Thanks. The sentence "I got screwed" is kinda ruined for me, though. | |
| Feb 5, 2016 at 19:57 | comment | added | femtoRgon | @TobiaTesan - No, both of those would imply that he caused (ie. requested, or ordered) it to happen. "His limbs were removed" or "He lost his limbs" are better. | |
| Feb 5, 2016 at 14:49 | comment | added | Tobia Tesan | @crunch sorry, help a non-native speaker here: would "he got his limbs removed" would have been correct? | |
| Feb 5, 2016 at 13:00 | comment | added | einpoklum | @BobJarvis: "He was not in the least bit scared To be mashed into a pulp / Or to have his eyes gouged out / And his elbows broken / To have his kneecaps split / And his body burned away / And his limbs all hacked and mangled / Brave Sir Robin" | |
| Feb 5, 2016 at 12:24 | comment | added | Bob Jarvis - Слава Україні | @einpoklum: I was thinking about the Black Knight. "T'is but a scratch!" | |
| Feb 3, 2016 at 18:45 | comment | added | David Richerby | @crunch Doesn't sound remotely voluntary to me; I'm not sure why you read that into the text. (I know it's been edited since then; I checked the original text.) | |
| Feb 3, 2016 at 0:27 | comment | added | einpoklum | @crunch: Sounds like the tale of Brave Sir Robin in Monty Python and the Holy Grail. | |
| S Feb 2, 2016 at 20:34 | history | suggested | fluffy | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
Improved phrasing.
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| Feb 2, 2016 at 20:14 | review | Suggested edits | |||
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| Feb 2, 2016 at 17:32 | comment | added | mungflesh | I have altered the text. Pray I don't alter it further. | |
| Feb 2, 2016 at 17:31 | history | edited | mungflesh | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
Altered use of language due to it being slightly misleading
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| Feb 2, 2016 at 16:51 | comment | added | crunch | Quirk of English: "he had his limbs removed and his body burned" sounds like it was voluntary. | |
| Feb 2, 2016 at 16:16 | history | edited | mungflesh | CC BY-SA 3.0 |
grammar and punctuation
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| Feb 2, 2016 at 14:10 | history | answered | mungflesh | CC BY-SA 3.0 |