Recently read a story that now I cannot remember the name, or the writer. An entertaining short story that explores the relationship between Satan and Jehovah, along with a cast of the Heavenly Host (archangel Michael, even Jesus!). It deals with how Jehovah and Satan are the first entities to self-realize out of a maelstrom of chaos, and the secret grand plan Jehovah has to stabilize their existence. Really a great short story.

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    This is fiction, but is it SF? Is it on topic? – ThePopMachine Nov 21 '15 at 2:24
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    @ThePopMachine Of course it is. Why wouldn't it be? – user14111 Nov 21 '15 at 2:40
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    @ThePopMachine So you have decided to purge this site of all stories about angels, devils, heaven, and hell? You've got a lot of work ahead of you. – user14111 Nov 21 '15 at 2:59
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    @ThePopMachine This is on-topic. See, e.g. this meta answer. Quoting: "allowances are made for fictional works based on the religions/myths, provided that they are intended as a fictional work, and not a documentary". – Null Nov 21 '15 at 3:16
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    @ThePopMachine Thanks, Null. Also see DVK's answer here: "I think the general Meta consensus is that if the writer INTENDS the story to be fiction (e.g., the story of Christ in 'Master and Margarita' by Bulgakov; or Marvel's Asgardians); it's SFF. If it's merely a movie about a religious event ('Passion of Christ' by Mel Gibson; or hell, Charlton Heston's 'Ten Commandments') it's not." I think it's clear that the story described here is more like The Master and Margarita than The Passion of the Christ. – user14111 Nov 21 '15 at 3:29

Are you sure it was a short story? Your description matches the 1984 novel To Reign in Hell by Steven Brust. Do any of these covers look familiar? The first sentence of the prologue might ring a bell:

Snow, tenderly caught by eddying breezes, swirled and spun in to and out of bright, lustrous shapes that gleamed against the emerald-blazoned black drape of sky and sparkled there for a moment, hanging, before settling gently to the soft, green-tufted plain with all the sickly sweetness of an over-written sentence.

Here is a plot summary from Wikipedia (emphasis added to highlight points mentioned in the question):

The story begins by detailing the creation story of Heaven. There is a substance of raw chaos: cacoastrum; and stuff of order: illiaster. From the illiaster came consciousness that resulted in the firstborn angels: Yaweh, Satan, Michael, Lucifer, Raphael, Leviathan and Belial. The firstborn create Heaven in order to protect themselves from the cacoastrum, which threatens to destroy them. This event is later referred to as the 'First Wave.' The walls of heaven have collapsed two times since then, resulting in the Second and Third Waves, creating, respectively, the archangels and angels.

After the third wave Heaven has been divided into four regencies named for the cardinal points of the compass. Belial, half-mad and trapped in the form of a dragon, rules the Northern Regency. Leviathan, a kindly woman in the shape of a sea serpent, oversees the Western Regency. Satan rules the South with his loyal servant Beelzebub, trapped in the body of a golden retriever. Lucifer rules the East, with his consort Lilith, who had previously been briefly involved with Satan. Yaweh oversees all of Heaven from the center, aided by his healer Raphael and warrior Michael.

Other important angels include the blind musician Harut, the poetry-quoting Ariel, the craftsman Asmodai, the smirking Mephistopheles, the dour Uriel, the sneering Abdiel, the somewhat naive Gabriel and the coolly competent Zaphkiel. A mostly independent subplot involving two angels named Kyriel and Sith gives the viewpoints of two low-level angels who get swept up in the story's events.

Trouble arises when Yaweh, worried about the imminent Fourth Wave, devises The Plan: the blueprint for a new, larger Heaven (Earth), with walls that the cacoastrum cannot destroy. Unfortunately, at least a thousand angels will die during the construction of his new Paradise. Yaweh charges Satan with securing the cooperation of every angel in Heaven, and Satan finds himself wondering if they have the ethical right to coerce anyone into participating.

Exacerbating matters is Abdiel, who craves Satan's rank. Abdiel begins playing Satan against Yaweh, telling each of them that the other will no longer discuss matters. Step by step, the factions escalate. Abdiel attempts to wound Beelzebub and accidentally kills the innocent Ariel. When Satan and Beelzebub attempt to avenge this, Raphael and Michael misinterpret this as proof their opponents have abandoned all decency.

Yaweh, attempting to rally his side, convinces his supporters that he is not only the eldest of the Firstborn, he is God. This announcement stuns not only his opponents, but even Michael, his closest supporter. Using the energy of his newfound worshipers, he creates a new angel, Yeshuah, who he proclaims his son and heir.

As the war continues, Zaphkiel intercepts Satan and brings him directly to Yaweh, where the two discover that Abdiel has played them both for fools. However, Satan will not acknowledge Yaweh's dishonest claim to Godhood, and neither will Yaweh abandon it, so the conflict continues.

Abdiel, now on the run from both sides, begins digging a hole in the wall of Heaven, but Mephistopheles finds and strangles him before he can finish the work. Satan's hosts gain the ascendency in the battle. Seeing that defeat is inevitable, Yaweh decides to destroy Heaven by expanding the hole that Abdiel had been deepening. Yet when the wall of Heaven is breached, flooding Heaven with cacoastrum, Yaweh finds that he cannot allow himself to be destroyed by the cacoastrum; it is not in his nature.

Yeshuah, seeing an opportunity to triumph over Satan's forces, sacrifices his life by leaping into the breach and directing the rupture towards the hosts of Satan, devastating them. Meanwhile, as the rebels fight for Heaven, Satan is captured but with the help of Beelzebub and Mephistopheles leaves Heaven; his followers join him in the abyss and create a third stronghold: Hell.

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