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Okay this is a story someone else was telling me about. I wanted to read it but he didn't remember the title. This was in the mid-eighties; the story itself must be at least that old.

The protagonist invents a machine he believes will allow him to travel to parallel universes and steps through it. He finds himself in the room he has just left; apparently it didn't work.

He steps outside just to check. Same street. Same cars. Typical 20th century USA. Darn.

He does notice an object across the way which at first he takes to be someone's laundry left out to dry, or perhaps a banner of some kind. He walks over to investigate.

It is the body of a nun, hanging from a noose.

I've always wondered what happen next...

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    Andre, this is tangential but you might find the plot also interesting: imdb.com/title/tt0112167
    – ANeves
    Jan 27, 2020 at 13:56
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    Very Philip Dickensian. Jan 29, 2020 at 8:38
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    @DavidTonhofer The particular device of a hanging body being the source of dissonance is used in Dick's The Hanging Stranger short story (recently featured on the SYSK podcast). Jan 29, 2020 at 12:09

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The Forest of Time by Michael Flynn. I read it in The Year's Best Science Fiction: Fifth Annual Collection:

Years best SF 05

The story is told from the perspective of Oberleutnant Rudolf Knecht, Chief Scout of the Army of the Kittatinny. Knecht captures the traveller believing him to be a spy, and the story is told as extracts from the man's journal. The first entry sets the scene:

I am embarking on a great adventure. Does that sound grandiose? Very well, let it. Grandiose ideas deserve grandiose expression. Tomorrow, I make my first long range Jump. Sharon claims that it is too soon for such a field test, but she is too cautious. I’ve engineered the equipment. I know what it can do. Triple redundancy on critical circuits. Molecular foam memory. I am a certified reliability engineer, after all. The short Jumps were all successful. So what could go wrong?

But as you say the jump doesn't work and the traveller's journal records:

A slight miscalculation. I should be back in the lab with Rosa, but I’m in somebody’s apartment, instead. It’s still Philly out the window—though a shabbier, more run-down Philly than I remember.

And then:

I must leave immediately! That black thing on the lamppost kept nagging at the back of my mind. So I got out my binoculars and studied it. It was a nun in a black habit, hanging in a noose. Hanging a long time, too, by the looks of it.

Since this is the point you want to continue from I won't say where the story goes next.

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    Not knowing what happens next bugs me more than it should. Guess I'll have to read it myself too...
    – bracco23
    Jan 27, 2020 at 13:34
  • @JohnRennie Thanks for the heads up. Jan 27, 2020 at 16:26
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    Flynn's a pretty good author. Sometimes a bit high on the author politico-meter, with a Libertarian, rather than pure Right, sensibility, but generally clever reads. Now I want to read it too. Jan 27, 2020 at 19:05
  • Well thanks a lot Mr. Rennie. I've been wondering about that story for a long time. Now I've got to read it. Jan 28, 2020 at 3:13
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    @AndreDuval if this is the correct story then please will you mark the answer as accepted by clicking the green tick symbol to the left of my answer. Thanks :-) Jan 28, 2020 at 5:23
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Although it doesn't have the specific part with the nun, the rest of your description also fits very well with Heinleinn's The Number of the Beast

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  • Can you explain how this matches? IIRC, the protagonists travelled between universes in the Gay Deceiver, not through a portal, and there was never any confusion that they may not have traveled.
    – DavidW
    Jan 27, 2020 at 22:58
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    @DavidW I don't have my copy of the book at hand to find a quote, but the first time they traveled there was a "everything looks the same! it must not have worked!" scene Jan 28, 2020 at 0:02
  • Read that one. It's not it but it's a good try. (Good novel too though nowhere close to Heinlein's best.) Thanks Jan 28, 2020 at 3:15

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