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Back when I was in 8th grade (1976-77), I read an old short horror story about a man living in an apartment. I can remember that he hears either a new neighbor, or a neighbor he had never seen/met, making weird noises or something and curiosity gets the better of him and he either opens the door to the neighbor's apartment or gets the neighbor to come to his apartment and opens his own door. When the door is opened, his neighbor turns out to be a winged monster/demon.

I think I read it in one of the many Alfred Hitchcock anthologies that Robert Arthur did back in the '60s, but I cannot for the life of me remember the author or which book it was in.

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  • I'm pretty sure this is an HP Lovecraft shortstory, which I listened to as an audiobook but I can't remember the name. Maybe that helps someone else find it though? Commented Nov 25 at 10:29
  • Actually I think I was dimly recalling The Music of Erich Zann which does not seem a great fit. Commented Nov 25 at 10:38
  • @JackAidley Cannot be The Strange High House in the Mist either: even if it sort of has demons to let in, it has no doors to let them through. Or if it has doors, they have no doorsteps. Not as if winged demons would care, come to think of it. Commented Nov 28 at 14:04

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This is a long shot, as it's not a very good match for your description:

  1. The man is in a hotel room rather than an apartment.
  2. His curiosity is aroused, not by a noise, but by a dream of blood coming through the keyhole of the locked door between his room and the next one.
  3. Instead of opening the door, he peeks through the keyhole.
  4. The monster is a troll, not a winged demon.

"The Troll", a short story by T. H. White which was the answer to the old question Short horror story I read in the 70's where the protagonist witnesses a monster disguised as a human eat someone. The story has appeared in many compilations. You might have read it in the 1967 anthology Alfred Hitchcock Presents: Stories That Scared Even Me edited by Robert Arthur which can be borrowed (for free but registration required) from the Internet Archive; a selection of stories from this anthology (including "The Troll") was published as the Dell paperback Alfred Hitchcock Presents: Scream Along with Me.

Excerpt:

"It was the vividness of the dreams that was impressive, their minute detail and horrible reality. The blood came through the keyhole of a locked door which communicated with the next room. I suppose the two rooms had originally been designed en suite. It ran down the door panel with a viscous ripple, like the artificial one created in the conduit of Trumpingdon Street. But it was heavy, and smelt. The slow welling of it sopped the carpet and reached the bed. It was warm and sticky. My father woke up with the impression that it was all over his hands. He was rubbing his first two fingers together, trying to rid them of the greasy adhesion where the fingers joined.

"My father knew what he had got to do. Let me make it clear that he was now perfectly wide awake, but he knew what he had got to do. He got out of bed, under this irresistible knowledge, and looked through the keyhole into the next room.

[. . . .]

"What my father saw through the keyhole in the next room was a Troll. It was eminently solid, about eight feet high, and dressed in brightly ornamented skins. It had a blue face, with yellow eyes, and on its head there was a woolly sort of nightcap with a red bobble on top. The features were Mongolian. Its body was long and sturdy, like the trunk of a tree. Its legs were short and thick, like the elephant's feet that used to be cut off for umbrella stands, and its arms were wasted: little rudimentary members like the forelegs of a kangaroo. Its head and neck were very thick and massive. On the whole, it looked like a grotesque doll.

[. . . .]

"The Troll was eating a lady. Poor girl, she was tightly clutched to its breast by those rudimentary arms, with her head on a level with its mouth. She was dressed in a nightdress which had crumpled up under her armpits, so that she was a pitiful naked offering, like a classical picture of Andromeda. Mercifully, she appeared to have fainted.

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    This does seem quite similar, but doesn't seem to have the 'door opening' sequence that I remember. That particular scene is the 'reveal' and you don't know it's a monster/demon until that happens. You think it's just an annoying or noisy neighbor. I actually think I have that particular Hitchcock anthology, and do want to read that story as well. I think this is one of the great things about this site - even if it's not the exact story - it's one you might want to read anyway! Thanks for posting. Commented Nov 25 at 9:17
  • What happens to the man after he opens the door?
    – user14111
    Commented Nov 25 at 11:23
  • The man sees a winged creature with moisture dripping off of it. I remember the description mentioning it looking like it had just completed a very long flight. Commented Nov 25 at 13:16
  • And the story just ends there, or do the mam and the winged creature have a conversation? Why is the winged creature so noisy?
    – user14111
    Commented Nov 25 at 14:05
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    I wish I could remember more. I can't remember if the guy gets eaten or what, and I can't remember specifics about why the guy was so curious. I just seemed to remember something about noise next door. It's a 45+ year old memory.. ;-) Commented Nov 25 at 14:59
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Possibly The Other Celia by Theodore Sturgeon. Description is here:

Theodore Sturgeon does a beautiful job of sucking the reader into a strange mystery by describing the habits of a peculiar character, Slim Walsh. Walsh is a nosy guy, the kind who checks out the medicine cabinet when he uses other people’s bathrooms. He sneaks into other people’s rooms at the rooming house when they are gone. Not to steal, but to just see the secret side of how other people live. The story is about him discovering the very strange lifestyle of Celia Barton.

It's available here

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    It doesn't match in my opinion. Cecilia isn't a demon but possibly some kind of alien. She's harmless. She doesn't make noises. Her nosy neighbor messes with her precisely because she's entirely nondescript, and he cannot stand not understanding someone's secrets, and therefore finds something about her -- not that she's a winged demon, but that she's not human. It's not a horror story, either.
    – Andres F.
    Commented Nov 25 at 1:51
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    (For some reason I find this Sturgeon story entirely compatible with Bradbury's style. It could have been written by the latter!)
    – Andres F.
    Commented Nov 25 at 1:53
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    Thanks for the tip! Yeah, I don't think this is quite the story I'm thinking of, but I LOVE Sturgeon and will definitely look it up. I have a specific memory about the guy opening a door and then discovering the monster/demon. Commented Nov 25 at 9:14
  • that was a weird one. Commented Nov 29 at 2:05

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