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I read this short fiction about 10 years ago in a collection in English. More a novelette than a short story, I would say.

It is definitive not in the world of Tolkien, not even in fandom. There are, however, several "races" in the sense of Tolkien. Big People (or Big Folks ?), that is, us. Hinted at, but never seen in the story. Very small people, less than three feet tall, and their collective name is not Hobbits, but I don't remember what it was. These represent most characters in the story. Also one character, taller than these non-Hobbits, but smaller than Big People. His people has a collective name which is not Dwarves. Again, I don't remember what it was. Besides there are trolls, who are not turned into stone if sunlight reaches them, one cannot trap them like Bilbo did in "The Hobbit". Still, they are very sluggish in the daytime and prefer to hide from the sun and sleep. Also a huge spider, and more horrible antagonists.

The story begins when the non-Dwarf sells to a (young) non-Hobbit a map to a hidden treasure he claims to be too old and not adventurous enough to return to. IIRC, he says that the first time he found it, he had no way to bring it all back and took just a few handfuls of gold coins, of which he still has some.

The non-Dwarf has a horrible accent. I could not understand what he said without reading it aloud and trying to make sense of what I was saying...

So a party of non-Hobbits follow the map, fight antagonists, find the treasure but only bring back a few handfuls, like the non-Dwarf did.


EDIT

Judith Jones suggested The Iron Tower. It is clearly not my story, but there is something interesting in her answer.

She mentioned several names of races. Well the names Rucks, Hloks and Ogrus definitely sound wrong. One of "my" two races might have a name like that, but I don't think so. It sounds wrong, but I really don't remember anything about one of the names.

But she also mention "warrow". Now this does not exist in English except in fantasy novels. But in my french ears, it sounds "as if it might be" an english word. It is definitely not the name of the other race, it does not ring any bell. But it reminded me that one the races (I think it was the taller one, the unique "not-Dwarf" character in the story, rather than the many "not-Hobbits" characters, even shorter, but I am not positive) had a name that, like "warrow", does not really exist in English but "sounds" as if it were an english word. But I don't remember what it was, except it was not warrow, nor "halfling".

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  • The Nobbit, perhaps?
    – AKA
    Commented Dec 22, 2023 at 13:55
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    No, a completely different name, which I don't remember, but it had no connection with the sound of "Hobbit". Only the size !
    – Alfred
    Commented Dec 22, 2023 at 14:22
  • Was it obviously a parody of the Hobbit? Commented Mar 27 at 20:55
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    @JudithJones No, not at all. I use the words "non-Hobbit", "non-Dwarf" ONLY because of the relative sizes of the characters with respect of each other and of "Big People" (or maybe "Big Folks" ?), namely, "ordinary" humans. The story is very different even if some tropes (trolls, huge spider) were common.
    – Alfred
    Commented Mar 28 at 18:46
  • The accent that can only be understood by reading aloud reminds me of The Bridge by Iam Banks but it does not match the rest you remember. Commented Mar 29 at 9:57

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It might possibly be The Iron Tower.

It has different names for races similar to those in Tolkien's work.

Aurion, desperate to hold back the dark tide of Rucks, Hloks, Ogrus, and worse, calls for aid from the other good races of Mithgar.

The hero is short and his name is obviously hobbit inspired.

Tuck Underbank is a Warrow—a small, elf-like humanoid renowned for their ability as archers

From TV tropes

The Iron Tower is a trilogy of high fantasy novels in the Mithgar series by Dennis L. McKiernan. The trilogy was published in 1984, later being released as an omnibus in 2000.

It consists of:

  • The Dark Tide
  • Shadows of Doom
  • The Darkest Day

For thousands of years, the forces of the dark lord Modru and his master Gyphon have been trapped in hiding, rendered powerless by the light of the sun. Now however, with the arrival of the Myrkenstone, Modru has found a way to blot out the sun, and his armies set out to ravage the land of Mithgar. Standing against him are the armies of man, led by King Aurion Redeye and his sons, Galen and Igon. They will not be enough, however, and Aurion, desperate to hold back the dark tide of Rucks, Hloks, Ogrus, and worse, calls for aid from the other good races of Mithgar.

Tuck Underbank is a Warrow—a small, elf-like humanoid renowned for their ability as archers. Having left home with a band of friends to become Thornwalkers—guardians of the border—Tuck finds himself recruited into the king's army when his captain, Patrel Rushlock, answers Aurion's call for aid. Though Tuck doesn't know it, he's about to find himself at the centre of events that will shape the future of Mithgar for centuries to come.

Might be worth you taking a look.

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    You can borrow a copy at archive.org/details/irontoweromnibus0000denn to verify details.
    – FuzzyBoots
    Commented Mar 29 at 19:30
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    @FuzzyBoots I checked on archive. It does not at all fit my memories. Much too long. And in my story, there were only three names of races, the very small main characters, the slightly bigger with a single mentioned character with the horrible accent, and trolls (in addition to normal humans, never seen at all but mentioned). No dark lord, no armies.
    – Alfred
    Commented Mar 31 at 2:01
  • @JudithJones I am convinced that your answer is NOT the book I am looking for, so I do NOT accept it. However, since there is no other answer and also because your "warrow" reminded me that one of the races has a name that "sounds" like an english word, I did award you the bounty "manually" during the "grace period" that begins after the bonus has expired.
    – Alfred
    Commented Apr 3 at 21:31
  • Many thanks. I wish I could have found your actual book. I can still look. Commented Apr 3 at 21:34

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